OMG!!!!!!!!! That is awesome battle to watch!!!!!!!!!! If this waz on T.V. people all around the world would watch just like people all around the world read it!!!!!!!!!!!! It would be so awesome!!!!!!!!!
That's all I can say, "Wow."
Love the doujinshi, it's different from the usual, stupid, perverted hentai you see nowadays (I don't read those BTW.)
I like your coloring and the detail you put in your art.
A++ for you!!
You should make doujinshi more often!
Matrix-GodFeatured By OwnerMar 20, 2006Student General Artist
I really don't believe what the last person said about this... I really think every thing is cool! The way you drew Dexter... he looks too awesome for his own good! Dexter's laboratory was one of my fav shows, even more than the PPGs actually! He really looks like those cool, silent types...
I'm sorry about all the complaints, but like they say, critisizm is good....
Any way. I think its kinda offencive for buttercup to be making fun of Dexters glasses. I was willing to let it fly the first time, but the way you keep repeating it makes it stand out more. Kids can't help it if they can't see. The other thing, I think that this would be cooler if you bumped every one up to like, seventh grade, then the mini skirts and the funky hair dos would be normal... But honestly, your supposed to be dealing with little kids here!
You might want to add a comma after "Prepare yourself" in Dexter's last line. My brain hitched on how to read that, and it spoiled the moment a little.
Overall, though, this is an excellent doujinshi. The layout of panels is a little bland, perhaps, but the way you have things stick out of the panels (hair here, glasses there, etc.) helps with that.
You might also consider adding links in all the doujinshi pages' descriptions to the cover page, and in the cover page's description to all the others. I tend to go through someone's entire gallery if I find something by them that I like, but I assume most people won't. Adding that navigability will probably increase your readership. And it is worth reading.
I’ve never had a high opinion of Dexter. Some of the episodes from his show where entertaining, a couple even cool, but most where just dumb.
You’ve succeeded in making him into one of my favorite character types. I therefore gain respect for Dexter and applaud your skill. I especially like the final panel of him before To Be continued. The smile, the “lets go” expression never fails.